12-15-2014, 06:11 AM
(12-15-2014, 05:02 AM)Voker101 Wrote: Oh okay, you think I stretched too hard for the rhymes, thats what you're saying?I was saying aaaabbbbccccdddd. There are more complex ways to interweave your rhymes that might be more interesting.
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