Black Sand Beach

[tectak]

Tect thanks for the feedback. Though the poem is not about dutch elm disease I do see why you would think so in the second stanza. Looking back at this poem I also thought the second stanza and the lack for first person narrative made it a bit confusing. I'll try and do another edit of this one and not botch it up. I typically find old poems lacking in clarity something I need to work on. Also I tried to break meter and rhyme in the poem to make it more consistant

Who is confused now? I refer you to your reply to marksworth
...but good egg, looking forward to the edit.
Best,
tectak