12-24-2014, 06:03 AM 
	
	
	(12-24-2014, 05:53 AM)Wjames Wrote: Bottle’s become microphones,Funny poem. Only a few questions, as mentioned in the crit.
grandma thinks she’s Cher;
limbo dancing nieces flail
but grandpa’s unaware. Whole stanza is pretty funny. I imagine this familial scenario is probably relatable for somebody on here.
Napping with a drink in hand,
his snores conduct the beat;
my voice is like a crocodile’s, A crocodile's voice? Interesting..though I wonder what a crocodile actually sounds like.
so I just move my feet. Because your voice is like a crocodile's, you default to moving your feet?
"Where there are roses we plant doubt.
Most of the meaning we glean is our own,
and forever not knowing, we ponder."
-Fernando Pessoa
	
Most of the meaning we glean is our own,
and forever not knowing, we ponder."
-Fernando Pessoa

 

 
