Tap-Along
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(12-24-2014, 05:53 AM)Wjames Wrote:  Bottle’s become microphones,
grandma thinks she’s Cher;
limbo dancing nieces flail
but grandpa’s unaware. Whole stanza is pretty funny. I imagine this familial scenario is probably relatable for somebody on here.
 
Napping with a drink in hand,
his snores conduct the beat;
my voice is like a crocodile’s, A crocodile's voice? Interesting..though I wonder what a crocodile actually sounds like.
so I just move my feet. Because your voice is like a crocodile's, you default to moving your feet? 
Funny poem. Only a few questions, as mentioned in the crit.
"Where there are roses we plant doubt.
Most of the meaning we glean is our own,
and forever not knowing, we ponder."

-Fernando Pessoa
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Tap-Along - by Wjames - 12-24-2014, 05:53 AM
RE: Tap-Along - by ajcohen613 - 12-24-2014, 06:03 AM
RE: Tap-Along - by Wjames - 01-01-2015, 03:55 AM
RE: Tap-Along - by 71degrees - 01-02-2015, 12:30 PM
RE: Tap-Along - by somnium - 01-02-2015, 01:14 PM
RE: Tap-Along - by Wjames - 01-02-2015, 01:40 PM
RE: Tap-Along - by somnium - 01-02-2015, 01:42 PM
RE: Tap-Along - by Bunx - 01-03-2015, 12:42 AM
RE: Tap-Along - by MikaelHeller - 01-04-2015, 10:02 AM
RE: Tap-Along - by Wjames - 01-18-2015, 06:05 AM
RE: Tap-Along - by Rustymetal - 01-28-2015, 06:16 PM
RE: Tap-Along - by RiverNotch - 02-02-2015, 01:23 AM
RE: Tap-Along - by Jimster41 - 02-02-2015, 01:41 AM



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