12-28-2014, 12:19 PM
(12-11-2014, 12:22 PM)bgre9184 Wrote: Haha short with a punch. Maybe add "I'll miss that dog" at the end. Leave the readers to decide if it was referring to the pit or wife.I agree with this, maybe to clarify you could add something about the dog at the end. Nonetheless, this is humorous and well thought out.
