Tap-Along

[Bunx]

Really liked the flow and the meter of this poem. Also the subject matter was quite uplifting reminds me of good times hanging out with my extended family. Also loved the universal imagery aka: the slipping grandpa nursing a drink. Poem was definitely entertaining and uplifting. The only thing I would/could suggest is maybe extending the poem and the story. I think it has alot of potential even one more stanza wrapping up the poem could be good, but that is up to you! Love the poem as is