01-04-2015, 10:02 AM
A fine little piece. I actually had to look up what a crocodile sounds like, so I learned something too.
The last line of the poem is its weakest (in my opinion), though I'm not sure as to how one would edit it.
I disagree with the previous poster in that this poem would require another stanza; I think it achieves what it sets out to do.
The last line of the poem is its weakest (in my opinion), though I'm not sure as to how one would edit it.
I disagree with the previous poster in that this poem would require another stanza; I think it achieves what it sets out to do.