01-21-2015, 05:42 PM
Thank you for posting this. Things like this should be aired ...(My honest opinion those who have judged and taken such mindless and insensitive action in this case - need a slap upside the head).
Your poem manages to convey that message without being preachy or offering a judgement. Good on you.
Wordy and more prose than poetic, repitition of the word pain all could be chewed over... but this offering stands as it is for me and non the worse for it.
thanks for sharing
Your poem manages to convey that message without being preachy or offering a judgement. Good on you.
Wordy and more prose than poetic, repitition of the word pain all could be chewed over... but this offering stands as it is for me and non the worse for it.
thanks for sharing

