Wild Life

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Late
last night
a woman
was heard
screaming
at the thin
moon.

In
an alley
behind
a distant house,
a chained
dog strained
to join
her.

Edit #1

Late last evening, a woman
is heard screaming at a thin moon.

In an alley behind a distant house,
a chained dog strains to join her.

The woman is pregnant with unheard ideas;
they kick like the unborn.


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