01-28-2015, 06:48 PM
I loved the first stanza, it seems really simple to here, very stark but beautiful. The next two stanzas I get a little unsure. Is it about a religious war? I feel as though I am missing a connection. I don't have a hell of a lot of poetry reading experience so sometimes I feel as though I have missed bits. I love the sound of "Croak into blackness, silence the dawn". Again I don't have the right words but it seemed the most "together" poem I have read here tonight.