01-28-2015, 07:32 PM
What a light hearted look at divorce. I loved the title, I pick poems to read like I pick racehorses on Melbourne cup.....by the name. I think the drink me ties in. I like the last line too, makes it just a bizarre enough thought at that point in time to help with the Wonderland vibe. The only thing I am not too fussed on is the 4th stanza. Compared to the others it is very ???? plain. The wording is much more basic than all the rest.
What a light hearted look at divorce. I loved the title, I pick poems to read like I pick racehorses on Melbourne cup.....by the name. I think the drink me ties in. I like the last line too, makes it just a bizarre enough thought at that point in time to help with the Wonderland vibe. The only thing I am not too fussed on is the 4th stanza. Compared to the others it is very ???? plain. The wording is much more basic than all the rest.
What a light hearted look at divorce. I loved the title, I pick poems to read like I pick racehorses on Melbourne cup.....by the name. I think the drink me ties in. I like the last line too, makes it just a bizarre enough thought at that point in time to help with the Wonderland vibe. The only thing I am not too fussed on is the 4th stanza. Compared to the others it is very ???? plain. The wording is much more basic than all the rest.