02-15-2015, 02:56 AM 
	
	
	
		tectak,
Thank you so much for your insightful comments on my poem. I am glad to see some more of my weak spots. I will consider your advice, especially the line-by-line thoughts.
Cheers, S.M.
	
	
	
Thank you so much for your insightful comments on my poem. I am glad to see some more of my weak spots. I will consider your advice, especially the line-by-line thoughts.
Cheers, S.M.

 

 
