03-10-2015, 04:54 AM
(03-09-2015, 06:04 AM)Deadrise Wrote: Hello 71,Thanks for the look, John. My goal would be to subtract words, not add them so first suggestion (yes); second suggestion (no). I like your last thought.
(03-09-2015, 03:19 AM)71degrees Wrote: How, at night, (reads better to me when I drop "How")Take care,
instead of sleeping,
we should spoon
feed heat
to our mouths (feed each other/others ??????? Lots of interesting possibilities)
John

