White Fielf Green Sheep
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leanne - tricky to make yon clear since it means neither here nor there, but somewhere other there, sort of.

tectak - obfuscation? grammar? cockanay?

" It may well be a character with VDem writing a poem" - which it isn't - "but to what end?" - perhaps to show the frustration of yon - " It is eminently more germane to write ABOUT" - no need to shout - " someone who has suffered, for example, a severe stroke leaving them unable to communicate intelligibly than it is to write the malformed words or sentences which they may struggle with." - the sentences and words are perfectly formed, plus they offer you different ways to read them - for instance, them as nosey, can be read, as those who poke their nose into other's business or those who know him - " it is quite reasonable to write the clear thoughts of someone dreadfully afflicted with a severe speech impediment" vascular dementia is not about speech impediments, and it is not about clear thinking - if it were the character in the poem would not be so confused by he familiar - "but it has been done. In fact, I believe an Oscar was forthcoming." - should he have knocked everything of a table or mantle piece or some other Hollywood cliche? No thanks, I watch the dialect original - "If you want to say something about something then say something about something clearly." I have, if you think about it.
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White Fielf Green Sheep - by jeremyyoung - 03-14-2015, 06:50 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by Tiger the Lion - 03-14-2015, 07:26 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by Leanne - 03-14-2015, 07:33 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by jeremyyoung - 03-14-2015, 08:16 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by tectak - 03-14-2015, 08:33 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by Leanne - 03-14-2015, 08:23 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by jeremyyoung - 03-14-2015, 09:56 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by milo - 03-14-2015, 10:04 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by tectak - 03-14-2015, 04:39 PM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by Leanne - 03-14-2015, 10:02 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by Grace - 03-14-2015, 10:05 PM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by Erthona - 03-15-2015, 07:53 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by tectak - 03-15-2015, 08:41 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by Grace - 03-15-2015, 10:45 AM
RE: White Fielf Green Sheep - by billy - 03-15-2015, 04:34 PM



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