Value —from the Proverbs of Tharmas Erthona

[milo]

As strong as they seem, I could lift more than 1000x an ant's body weight.
Glad you liked the poems, perhaps they warrant revision.

It depends what you mean by revision. If you mean revision as in 'to reconcider and change' then that is pretty funny. Like, 'oh YOU like them... maybe I should change them then'. But anyway, these poems are really great, and they are two of three poems I have read recently that have kind of lit that spark in me.

lol - no, I mean revision as in polish.  Make basic edits, perhaps make a few metric fixes or what not.  Make them a little easier on the ear.  I am glad they lit a spark, it made my day to hear that.