The Sinner
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(03-29-2015, 11:28 PM)Voker101 Wrote:  
(03-29-2015, 05:20 PM)Brownlie Wrote:  
(03-29-2015, 12:04 PM)Voker101 Wrote:  Who slaughtered the lamb?
There' blood on his hands.-- There's
 The Angels done watched him.
They caught him red handed. -- Red handed is a cliche, and you already used the word hand.

With horns on his head
and thorns for a crown
With Death in his bed -- 
and glee on his frown

His conscience is yawning
Guilt by the gallows
The vultures are waiting
to feast on his morals.

He thirsts for more power.
The glass is half empty.
The moon's a fool.
He stole the stars.

He prays for a clean slate
But he gets ravens in reply
He's banned from the Heavens

If one door closes
Another one opens
Enter at Hell's gates.

My screaming is silent.
I hate this asylum.
Perhaps this will interest you.

"Death is a shadow-like character who appears in Book II of Paradise Lost, but is only mentioned briefly and fleetingly. Allegorically, he is the consequence of Satan's sin. He is not as sad a figure as Sin because he is empowered and in control of his condition. However, Death is malicious and armed, an aggressive character, carrying arrows and darts. Rather than suffering himself, Death takes pleasure in human pain and also in inflicting this pain. The only thing he fears is the Son who is fated to destroy him."
- http://darknessvisible.christs.cam.ac.uk...death.html
That lore is pretty cool. And I did the red handed thing to play off of blood being on his hands.
the cliche red-handed was originally created to signify blood on the hands so that isn't really a new angle.
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The Sinner - by Voker101 - 03-29-2015, 12:04 PM
RE: The Sinner - by Brownlie - 03-29-2015, 05:20 PM
RE: The Sinner - by Voker101 - 03-29-2015, 11:28 PM
RE: The Sinner - by milo - 03-30-2015, 12:01 AM
RE: The Sinner - by Voker101 - 03-30-2015, 03:03 AM
RE: The Sinner - by LorettaYoung - 03-30-2015, 08:05 AM
RE: The Sinner - by Voker101 - 03-30-2015, 08:28 AM
RE: The Sinner - by billy - 03-30-2015, 11:51 AM
RE: The Sinner - by Voker101 - 03-30-2015, 12:04 PM
RE: The Sinner - by Erthona - 03-30-2015, 12:52 PM
RE: The Sinner - by first_high_of_the_day - 04-01-2015, 12:46 AM



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