04-03-2015, 09:19 PM
Hi Time Out: yes, I understand that the rhymes vary and understand that it doesn't appeal this way. The break is because it answers the title. Thanks very much for reading and commenting. Loretta
PS: Found your comments helpful and too the point. I have made form changes and moved the solitary line up to S2. I would guess that changing tone in stanzas should rely on other technique than rhyme.. Thanks again, Loretta
PS: Found your comments helpful and too the point. I have made form changes and moved the solitary line up to S2. I would guess that changing tone in stanzas should rely on other technique than rhyme.. Thanks again, Loretta