Why Am I Silent? - title change from Why You are Silent
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(04-03-2015, 09:05 AM)LorettaYoung Wrote:  Why You Are Silent

Dark shadows call. This sentence doesn't say very much. Dark shadows call who? What do they say? etc.
Black curtains fall.
My knees are weak. This could be cliche - I've heard/seen it many many times.
Why don't You speak?
Why are You silent? The last two lines say the same thing.

Then diamonds dress my destiny.
Blessed clouds of mist enlighten me.
DarkĀ fades to light when angels sing., angels/demons can mean anything really, to anyone. They're also pretty well trodden territory.
and grace the grand and little things.
Why am I silent?

Again, the depth of darkness falls.
Days wearing black make frequent calls. This is a very obscure way of saying either "I wear black a lot", or "Most days are black/depressing".
Dark spirits stalk and reap their prey.
A smirking demon creeps my way.
Why are You silent?
I don't really get why the person is silent. Maybe your insecurities (all the questioning)? All the vague images of darkness sort of muddles everything for me, there's nothing concrete for me to grab on to.
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Messages In This Thread
RE: Why You Are Silent - by TimeOut - 04-03-2015, 03:34 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by LorettaYoung - 04-03-2015, 09:19 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by Wjames - 04-04-2015, 05:22 AM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by LorettaYoung - 04-04-2015, 07:11 AM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by Lloyd E Dixon - 04-04-2015, 12:39 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by LorettaYoung - 04-04-2015, 10:35 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by tectak - 04-05-2015, 01:02 AM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by Tiger the Lion - 04-05-2015, 02:08 AM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by tectak - 04-05-2015, 04:43 AM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by rayheinrich - 04-08-2015, 05:10 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by Grace - 04-08-2015, 08:14 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by LorettaYoung - 04-08-2015, 10:29 PM
RE: Why You Are Silent - by Grace - 04-09-2015, 12:19 AM



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