04-04-2015, 12:39 PM
I'm new at this don't want to be or sound critical, and maybe kinda looking for insight in return. With Wjames some parts feel a little fermiliar. I do like how the second stanza starts.. like the high times were owed to the person. But before asking self "why am I silent"
It could be perceived as god speaking. Our gods grace the thing large and small, while we tend to ignore these "blessing" at our "mightiest" times. Which with out punctuation, it could be seen as god stating or mocking us. maybe even lead to the question do we model our own gods and wonder why there's no answer. Like I said I don't know.
critical is good/mod
It could be perceived as god speaking. Our gods grace the thing large and small, while we tend to ignore these "blessing" at our "mightiest" times. Which with out punctuation, it could be seen as god stating or mocking us. maybe even lead to the question do we model our own gods and wonder why there's no answer. Like I said I don't know.
critical is good/mod