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Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.2 (Todd)

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04-23-2015, 02:17 PM

(12-16-2013, 05:18 PM)ellajam Wrote: Well, this has been interesting. Rather than abandon it I tried to get it to make sense first so I might be able to work on it. It may make more sense, the meter may be improved, but it now bores even me to death, sucked the life right out of it.

Just checking up this old thread. I wonder if now, given some time and distance and reading the three iterations over again you feel the same way.

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Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.2 (Todd) - by ellajam - 10-04-2013, 01:31 PM

RE: No Sleep Tonight - by FractalPacifist - 10-04-2013, 03:18 PM

RE: No Sleep Tonight - by ellajam - 10-04-2013, 03:37 PM

RE: No Sleep Tonight - by FractalPacifist - 10-04-2013, 03:48 PM

RE: No Sleep Tonight - by Erthona - 10-04-2013, 03:52 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by proteus24 - 04-24-2015, 04:54 PM

RE: No Sleep Tonight - by ellajam - 10-04-2013, 04:11 PM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by ellajam - 10-11-2013, 10:41 PM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by FractalPacifist - 10-12-2013, 01:07 AM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by ellajam - 10-12-2013, 06:11 AM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by milo - 10-13-2013, 03:00 AM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by ellajam - 10-13-2013, 12:13 PM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by milo - 10-14-2013, 12:38 PM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by kmstomsvik - 10-14-2013, 03:14 AM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by ellajam - 10-15-2013, 10:15 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 12-16-2013, 05:18 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by milo - 04-23-2015, 02:17 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by Snarly Locks - 04-23-2015, 03:25 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by TimeOut - 04-23-2015, 04:49 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-23-2015, 07:45 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by TimeOut - 04-23-2015, 08:42 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-23-2015, 09:51 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by milo - 04-24-2015, 04:05 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-24-2015, 05:05 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by milo - 04-24-2015, 06:44 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-24-2015, 06:48 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by milo - 04-24-2015, 08:48 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-24-2015, 09:32 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by bena - 04-24-2015, 10:18 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by billy - 04-24-2015, 11:45 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-24-2015, 07:46 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3) - by ellajam - 05-08-2015, 10:04 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3) - by Todd - 05-08-2015, 10:37 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3) - by ellajam - 05-08-2015, 11:09 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3) - by Todd - 05-08-2015, 11:22 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3) - by ellajam - 05-08-2015, 11:57 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by ellajam - 05-11-2015, 08:47 AM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by Todd - 05-11-2015, 01:53 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by ellajam - 05-11-2015, 04:05 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by Todd - 05-11-2015, 09:01 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by ellajam - 05-11-2015, 09:13 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by Mark101 - 05-11-2015, 11:06 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by ellajam - 05-12-2015, 02:43 AM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by Mark101 - 05-12-2015, 06:00 AM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by ellajam - 05-12-2015, 06:42 AM

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