04-23-2015, 03:25 PM
I have a tendency to favor things I can relate to. As a child, I can remember watching the moonbeams dancing through my window, so overall the poem worked for me.
"Sir owl's hoot and barn wren's trill
cross through the air, at last to find
a moonbeam's trail which flows downhill."
To me, that was the weakest --- but the last verse I especially liked, because I didn't expect it --
"Sir owl's hoot and barn wren's trill
cross through the air, at last to find
a moonbeam's trail which flows downhill."
To me, that was the weakest --- but the last verse I especially liked, because I didn't expect it --