04-24-2015, 09:32 AM
(04-24-2015, 08:48 AM)milo Wrote:Unwinds instead of winds is interesting, I'll have to try it and see I can carry it through. Thanks(04-24-2015, 06:48 AM)ellajam Wrote:perhaps - "a moonbeam's trail unwinds downhill(04-24-2015, 06:44 AM)milo Wrote: Downhill is a word that changes based on usage. As an adjective it is a trochee - she was a great downhill skier.Thanks, unless there's a chorus of "oh, no you don't" I'll keep downhill and just see what I can do to get rid of which.
As an adverb it is an iamb - things are really going downhill.
That being said, the plasticity on the accent is high enough that it would comfortably bow to predominant meter imo.
and slips right through the wooden blind"
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