Early Edit 0.01 Ellz, river

[tectak]

Still, wikipedia says "dray horse", not "dray (horse)". You don't say "drafts" for "draft horses", do you? (do you? Now that I think about it....) Anyway, I shouldn't really press on it too much, and yeah, I catch the drift -- misty sky would be kinda wrong. (although, ahem, clouds are nothing but mist, but that's way beside the point, and a bit of a joke.) Furred is real great, too, with the alliteration on the line there.

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tectak
(what about the dashes?)