05-08-2015, 09:57 PM
(05-08-2015, 08:30 PM)bena Wrote: First red marker: find the period. You know, that little dot that tells people you are done with a thought. I know its overrated and overused, but it does help.
Stay away from billy.
Hell stay away from us all, but yet, post and learn.
You made need a teleporter to pop in and post then pop out.
Welcome aboard!
bena (not my real name. It's mel)
PS I sell teleporters and periods cheap.
See the above? A few days from now you're going to write this beautiful poem
and all some idiot will comment on is the lack of a period.
The Brits, by the way, don't call it a 'period', they call it a 'full stop'. This is important
to know because there seem to be lot of Brits* here. And yes, this makes it more difficult
to learn to write properly. At least you can take solace in the unproven belief that hardship
builds character (even though it sometimes kills you as well).
BUT, there are many many more wonderful people here (even the idiot fixated on periods
isn't a bad sort, notwithstanding the teleporters are a bit dodgy. [Did I just use 'dodgy'?
Damn, see, those Brits ARE a bad influence.])
Welcome!
ray
(*If you happen to be a Brit, I offer my condolences.)
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions