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Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.2 (Todd)

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05-08-2015, 11:57 PM

(05-08-2015, 11:22 PM)Todd Wrote: The last four lines had a nice sense of symmetry and closure. I had no issue with them. I just realized I was in Mild and thought, "You've said too much, stop." I could see how that could send the wrong message.

Thanks, I'll leave them be for now.

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Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.2 (Todd) - by ellajam - 10-04-2013, 01:31 PM

RE: No Sleep Tonight - by FractalPacifist - 10-04-2013, 03:18 PM

RE: No Sleep Tonight - by ellajam - 10-04-2013, 03:37 PM

RE: No Sleep Tonight - by FractalPacifist - 10-04-2013, 03:48 PM

RE: No Sleep Tonight - by Erthona - 10-04-2013, 03:52 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by proteus24 - 04-24-2015, 04:54 PM

RE: No Sleep Tonight - by ellajam - 10-04-2013, 04:11 PM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by ellajam - 10-11-2013, 10:41 PM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by FractalPacifist - 10-12-2013, 01:07 AM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by ellajam - 10-12-2013, 06:11 AM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by milo - 10-13-2013, 03:00 AM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by ellajam - 10-13-2013, 12:13 PM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by milo - 10-14-2013, 12:38 PM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by kmstomsvik - 10-14-2013, 03:14 AM

RE: Late October (edit # 1) - by ellajam - 10-15-2013, 10:15 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 12-16-2013, 05:18 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by milo - 04-23-2015, 02:17 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by Snarly Locks - 04-23-2015, 03:25 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by TimeOut - 04-23-2015, 04:49 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-23-2015, 07:45 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by TimeOut - 04-23-2015, 08:42 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-23-2015, 09:51 PM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by milo - 04-24-2015, 04:05 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-24-2015, 05:05 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by milo - 04-24-2015, 06:44 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-24-2015, 06:48 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by milo - 04-24-2015, 08:48 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-24-2015, 09:32 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by bena - 04-24-2015, 10:18 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by billy - 04-24-2015, 11:45 AM

RE: Bedroom View (title change, edit # 2) - by ellajam - 04-24-2015, 07:46 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3) - by ellajam - 05-08-2015, 10:04 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3) - by Todd - 05-08-2015, 10:37 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3) - by ellajam - 05-08-2015, 11:09 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3) - by Todd - 05-08-2015, 11:22 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3) - by ellajam - 05-08-2015, 11:57 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by ellajam - 05-11-2015, 08:47 AM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by Todd - 05-11-2015, 01:53 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by ellajam - 05-11-2015, 04:05 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by Todd - 05-11-2015, 09:01 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by ellajam - 05-11-2015, 09:13 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by Mark101 - 05-11-2015, 11:06 PM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by ellajam - 05-12-2015, 02:43 AM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by Mark101 - 05-12-2015, 06:00 AM

RE: Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.1 (Todd) - by ellajam - 05-12-2015, 06:42 AM

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