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Sad Old Men

Sad Old Men
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05-09-2015, 03:03 AM
Really enjoyed the simplicity and flow of this poem. Also enjoyed the metaphor with love dying and living in cycles. Awesome read thanks for the post!
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Sad Old Men - by RiverNotch - 05-09-2015, 12:51 AM
RE: Sad Old Men - by celtickilduff - 05-09-2015, 02:27 AM
RE: Sad Old Men - by Bunx - 05-09-2015, 03:03 AM
RE: Sad Old Men - by Erthona - 05-20-2015, 02:11 AM
RE: Sad Old Men - by michael the tenant - 05-25-2015, 04:59 PM
RE: Sad Old Men - by RiverNotch - 05-23-2015, 02:17 PM
RE: Sad Old Men - by ellajam - 05-23-2015, 07:46 PM
RE: Sad Old Men - by Todd - 05-23-2015, 09:16 PM
RE: Sad Old Men - by rayheinrich - 05-24-2015, 06:21 PM
RE: Sad Old Men - by 71degrees - 05-25-2015, 11:49 AM
RE: Sad Old Men - by RiverNotch - 05-25-2015, 05:51 PM



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