Nightwalking (title change, edit #3.2 (Todd)

[ellajam]

Hello Ellajam,

There's nothing I can add that has not already been said, but I did just want to say that your piece is a lovely serene vision of a moonbeam's journey, and I enjoyed it very much.

It's really good to see it's progression too, from first draught to where it is now, the improvements are marked and to my mind, absolutely right.

Best regards

Mark

Thanks for reading, Mark, and for the vote of confidence. Any edit to L4 that you think might work?

I agree, it's fun to watch the poems change. For me, one of the great gifts of this site is being able to read through threads where people have posted various edits, watching which suggestions are taken and how the poem improves through the changes. Trying to understand it all has been a huge help to me in my own writing.