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At Altitude
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05-14-2015, 06:59 AM
I see what you mean. I tend to do that effect a lot with the title going right into the first line. If it's any consolation the line still reads well without the title feeding it.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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At Altitude - by Tiger the Lion - 05-13-2015, 03:44 PM
RE: At Altitude - by Mr. Creosote - 05-13-2015, 11:02 PM
RE: At Altitude - by Tiger the Lion - 05-13-2015, 11:35 PM
RE: At Altitude - by Todd - 05-14-2015, 12:37 AM
RE: At Altitude - by Tiger the Lion - 05-14-2015, 01:20 AM
RE: At Altitude - by Todd - 05-14-2015, 01:32 AM
RE: At Altitude - by Tiger the Lion - 05-14-2015, 06:49 AM
RE: At Altitude - by Todd - 05-14-2015, 06:59 AM
RE: At Altitude - by Erthona - 05-14-2015, 01:16 PM
RE: At Altitude - by Tiger the Lion - 05-15-2015, 11:37 AM
RE: At Altitude - by Todd - 05-15-2015, 12:59 PM
RE: At Altitude - by Tiger the Lion - 05-15-2015, 01:52 PM
RE: At Altitude - by billy - 05-15-2015, 04:02 PM
RE: At Altitude - by Tiger the Lion - 05-16-2015, 08:12 PM



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