At Altitude

[Tiger the Lion]

i like it and see it being related to nepal. [though it may not be] a couple of things from me to consider, or not

Exposed at Altitude  1.1 (Todd, Dale)
Lungs gasp; cliche, in such a short piece they stick out all the more, a suggestion would be more brevity.
Lungs
learning limitations
learning their limitations.
Earthquakes sound like questions i think this line is superb
made of thin air. a suggestion would be [in the air] or [on the air] or something along those lines
Stop asking me to open wider, i'm struggling at this. makes me think of dentist though i keep connecting it to lungs and altitude thinking i missed something.
I'm terrified already.

Thanks Billy. It did indeed started out as something inspired by Nepal. Something Dale wrote made me think. Ended up boiling two rabbits in one pot. Smells ok Though.