Sad Old Men
#8
The poem comes off as presumptuous, because it's seems a generalization.
You should make it clear you aren't talking from knowledge, but from observation.
If you did that it would sound genuine. You should either write about what you know
or lie convincingly.
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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Sad Old Men - by RiverNotch - 05-09-2015, 12:51 AM
RE: Sad Old Men - by celtickilduff - 05-09-2015, 02:27 AM
RE: Sad Old Men - by Bunx - 05-09-2015, 03:03 AM
RE: Sad Old Men - by Erthona - 05-20-2015, 02:11 AM
RE: Sad Old Men - by michael the tenant - 05-25-2015, 04:59 PM
RE: Sad Old Men - by RiverNotch - 05-23-2015, 02:17 PM
RE: Sad Old Men - by ellajam - 05-23-2015, 07:46 PM
RE: Sad Old Men - by Todd - 05-23-2015, 09:16 PM
RE: Sad Old Men - by rayheinrich - 05-24-2015, 06:21 PM
RE: Sad Old Men - by 71degrees - 05-25-2015, 11:49 AM
RE: Sad Old Men - by RiverNotch - 05-25-2015, 05:51 PM



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