06-16-2015, 04:11 AM
Thanks ellejam, sorry bout that!
Oo, not overwhelming! Okay, I did have to read it a few times, but I see how it become more the answer to the question and using imagery of art would be really awesome. "My page is the canvas" well, not that but just saying I think I understand what you mean.., thanks for all the advice, I'll consider and implement in my future revision.
Oo, not overwhelming! Okay, I did have to read it a few times, but I see how it become more the answer to the question and using imagery of art would be really awesome. "My page is the canvas" well, not that but just saying I think I understand what you mean.., thanks for all the advice, I'll consider and implement in my future revision.
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.