06-16-2015, 10:29 PM
(06-16-2015, 06:10 PM)queenconstantine Wrote: @ambrosial oh, now I like that that arrangement. snapshot of the moment, that concept just clicked, hmThis is a critical forum although we need to make that clearer, I myself just found that out recently.
Thanks Mercedes, I see your point, thinking about bells and incense now bring monks to mind.
just for the record, I was picturing a gypsy caravan, belled curtains, incense, crystal balls..XD
Is it okay to post revisions in the same day? Or is that breaking the rule of one poem in critique forums? Is this a critique forum?! Btw, I appreciate the comments, I see that's its senryu now, more about humans than the natural world..
The one a day rule does not apply to edits, only to new threads. Feel free to post edits on as many pieces as you want when they are ready.
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