haiku attempt

[billy]

i like the edit a heck of lot more queeni.

for me it sets up an image of a nepal temple in the mountains, if i had a piece of constructive feedback it would be to ask; [is and sigh] needed? good effort

Haha, thanks! I think I got it right.

Drifting incense
Bells whisper and sigh
Luminous moon

I spent a ridiculous amount of time on this?

Incense permeates
The rain, bells tinkle and sigh;;
Tell me my future