haiku attempt

haiku attempt

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06-17-2015, 06:35 PM

(06-16-2015, 11:59 AM)queenconstantine Wrote: Haha, thanks! I think I got it right.

Drifting incense
Bells whisper and sigh
Luminous moon

I spent a ridiculous amount of time on this?

Incense permeates
The rain, bells tinkle and sigh;;
Tell me my future

The edit I love, especially luminous moon Smile

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haiku attempt - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 11:59 AM

RE: haiku attempt - by billy - 06-16-2015, 12:22 PM

RE: haiku attempt - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 12:30 PM

RE: haiku attempt - by just mercedes - 06-16-2015, 02:11 PM

RE: haiku attempt - by Magpie - 06-16-2015, 03:10 PM

RE: haiku attempt - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 06:10 PM

RE: haiku attempt - by ellajam - 06-16-2015, 10:29 PM

RE: haiku attempt - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 11:57 PM

RE: haiku attempt - by Merrikay - 06-17-2015, 07:16 AM

RE: haiku attempt - by just mercedes - 06-17-2015, 07:41 AM

RE: haiku attempt - by billy - 06-17-2015, 11:45 AM

RE: haiku attempt - by Grace - 06-17-2015, 06:35 PM

RE: haiku attempt - by Magpie - 06-17-2015, 09:25 PM

RE: haiku attempt - by Merrikay - 06-17-2015, 11:51 PM

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