short & thweet
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Thanks folks-

You pointed out the issue that I also have with this one: "sharp grace notes..." It just don't sound right.

I am looking for some form of musical notation that will work. "Glissandos.." I think, works for the swooping motion of jay birds. And though "sharp grace notes..." may be plausible notation for crows on a piece of sheet music, it just don't play right coming out the speaking instrument.

Dang it. I knew it, too, but thought I'd run it through rehearsal to see if it'd get flagged. And sure enough...

At least I know for sure what to fix.

Ain't no way I'm changing "cool blue sheet music" though, and I'm still congratulating myself (like some prima donna) for having that pop outta my ear. I can appreciate that "azure" works with the syllable count, but I just like the way "cool blue" sounds, better.

Thanks again folks,
... Mark
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Messages In This Thread
short & thweet - by Mark A Becker - 06-24-2015, 05:15 AM
RE: I do haiku - by just mercedes - 06-24-2015, 07:24 AM
RE: I do haiku - by Mark A Becker - 06-24-2015, 08:44 AM
RE: I do haiku - by Magpie - 06-24-2015, 05:58 PM
RE: I do haiku - by billy - 06-24-2015, 06:06 PM
RE: I do haiku - by Mark A Becker - 06-24-2015, 10:18 PM
RE: I do haiku - by ChristopherSea - 06-24-2015, 11:44 PM
RE: I do haiku - by Mark A Becker - 06-25-2015, 12:42 AM
RE: I do haiku - by wordancer - 06-25-2015, 08:48 AM
RE: I do haiku - by Mark A Becker - 06-26-2015, 04:23 AM
RE: I do haiku - by rayheinrich - 06-27-2015, 03:41 AM
RE: I do haiku - by Mark A Becker - 06-27-2015, 07:36 AM
RE: I do haiku - by rayheinrich - 06-28-2015, 09:23 PM
RE: I do haiku - by Mark A Becker - 06-29-2015, 02:40 AM



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