07-13-2015, 11:33 PM
71, I really like the wisdom herein. ‘allows’ seems a bit off to my ear.
Would something like ‘offers’ convey the proper action?
You could also use ‘lily-colored.’
I might substitute ‘through it’ for ‘into it.’
See what you think. Thanks for sharing this one./Chris
Would something like ‘offers’ convey the proper action?
You could also use ‘lily-colored.’
I might substitute ‘through it’ for ‘into it.’
See what you think. Thanks for sharing this one./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris