08-11-2015, 03:02 PM
(08-09-2015, 02:03 PM)Quixilated Wrote: Hi Wjames,Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm glad you like it.
The title change really helps. It works as the key to unlock the why behind the audience reactions, it sets the stage.I love the dizzy feeling I get reading this one, first it's a play, then it's food, then it's emotional baggage, it's like a Russian nesting doll of images. Also it's such an interesting way to say you get out of it what you bring into it. Poetry is a bit the same way I would think. Anyway, just stopped by to say I like it.
--Quix


I love the dizzy feeling I get reading this one, first it's a play, then it's food, then it's emotional baggage, it's like a Russian nesting doll of images. Also it's such an interesting way to say you get out of it what you bring into it. Poetry is a bit the same way I would think. Anyway, just stopped by to say I like it.