Going home
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(08-18-2015, 05:38 PM)billy Wrote:  a nice shorty tom. the poem is much larger than its words. the last two line make it an almost prefect little poem

(08-17-2015, 05:51 PM)tectak Wrote:  Old friends are dead and gone away;
though streets and streams and oak trees stay.
Tarmac broken, granuled grey,
grows weeds.

tectak
2015
Hi billy,
we should never go back...weeds, y'know.
Thanks for commenting...I am getting writer's twitch.
tectak
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Messages In This Thread
Going home - by tectak - 08-17-2015, 05:51 PM
RE: Going home - by Leanne - 08-17-2015, 06:13 PM
RE: Going home - by tectak - 08-18-2015, 04:45 AM
RE: Going home - by Mark A Becker - 08-18-2015, 06:08 AM
RE: Going home - by tectak - 08-18-2015, 07:17 AM
RE: Going home - by Mark A Becker - 08-18-2015, 08:17 AM
RE: Going home - by tectak - 08-18-2015, 04:21 PM
RE: Going home - by billy - 08-18-2015, 05:38 PM
RE: Going home - by tectak - 08-18-2015, 11:16 PM



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