09-08-2015, 10:18 PM 
	
	
	(09-08-2015, 08:23 AM)crow Wrote: Ray—I was talking about the Grand Canyon in example 3. And w the tangerine, he's reading his own notes about how excellent it tasted, and is saying they seem idolatrous or something
Thanks for filling those in.
But I NAILED the Genevieve/Todd thing!!!
 
   
   
 When I listen to you read it out loud -- actually it's a performance, not just a reading -- it sounds
much better than when I read it on the page. Poetry (but not all) usually does.
Lyrics, well, that's what they're designed to do.
ray
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