< 9/11 Pays Off >

[rayheinrich]

a suggestion for the title would be
9/11 vision, are the [for]'s needed in the first section?

Thanks, you're right, using "spectacle" doesn't work. I was using it to connote
"bread-and-circus", but that's not the first meaning that comes to a reader's mind.
I don't like "vision" because it's something that's going to happen as opposed to
something that already has. Looking at the poem again, I think that "pays off"
more accurately portrays it. See what you think.

I got rid of the "for" 's as well, yep, works much better. Yes?