09-30-2015, 05:53 AM
Seems like a paean to the good old days that you're not sure existed. But faith is strong there, if allowed at all. And some insults to the uptight well fed minds with your archaic metal but eternally correct turns of phrase: ensuing to contrast, beholding but the beauty, [dub thee unforgiven]. And I think it works on those levels. But with poetry, funnily enough, sometimes the less levels the better. Which is nothing bad either way, if you can make it. That's me for both praise and advice.