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I hate this
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10-07-2015, 05:35 PM
(10-06-2015, 10:21 PM)Weeded Wrote: I can't seem to sleeptry and make the 2nd part more obtuse and try cut out ing words and any other excess. an example eyes forced shut no sleep- one sheep two sheep thre don't overly worry about syllable count. just keep each line as short as possible or use the 575 but make sure every word of it counts. |
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I hate this - by Weeded - 10-06-2015, 10:21 PM
RE: I hate this - by John - 10-07-2015, 01:04 AM
RE: I hate this - by Weeded - 10-07-2015, 07:05 AM
RE: I hate this - by tectak - 10-07-2015, 07:37 AM
RE: I hate this - by Weeded - 10-07-2015, 08:34 AM
RE: I hate this - by tectak - 10-07-2015, 03:36 PM
RE: I hate this - by billy - 10-07-2015, 05:35 PM
RE: I hate this - by Weeded - 10-07-2015, 05:46 PM
RE: I hate this - by RiverNotch - 10-08-2015, 04:39 AM
RE: I hate this - by Weeded - 10-08-2015, 08:45 AM
RE: I hate this - by ellajam - 10-08-2015, 10:37 AM
RE: I hate this - by Weeded - 10-08-2015, 11:33 AM
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