10-08-2015, 08:45 AM
Rivernotch,
Yeah every time I read what I wrote compared to others it just don't sound right. Your response makes it clear what I'm doing wrong so I thank you for that, I'm not sure what's with the haikus but I decided to hop on the bandwagon while it's rollin lol.
"Like a traveling monk into his death hut." That needs to be a line somewhere... Just sayin
Yeah every time I read what I wrote compared to others it just don't sound right. Your response makes it clear what I'm doing wrong so I thank you for that, I'm not sure what's with the haikus but I decided to hop on the bandwagon while it's rollin lol.
"Like a traveling monk into his death hut." That needs to be a line somewhere... Just sayin