10-22-2015, 05:25 AM
My favorite line in the poem is "Built by others; guarded by royal decree."
I liked this line because it was very crisp in the word "decree".
A couple of things distracted me
the word "paramount"
The rhyming scheme of "tight" and "twilight" seemed a bit cliche and not consistent in the poem.
"broods", I dont know what this word is.
I enjoyed imagining the workers toiling. First it was the migrants and then it was the natives. It was very though provoking and energetic the natives houses being deserted.
I liked this line because it was very crisp in the word "decree".
A couple of things distracted me
the word "paramount"
The rhyming scheme of "tight" and "twilight" seemed a bit cliche and not consistent in the poem.
"broods", I dont know what this word is.
I enjoyed imagining the workers toiling. First it was the migrants and then it was the natives. It was very though provoking and energetic the natives houses being deserted.