10-23-2015, 06:04 AM
I found the imagery in this poem to be really powerful. As I read it I found myself creating a very vivid scene in my head.
My favorite lines in the poem are
"Weaving threads through air with erratic artistry
That cannot be followed by eyes alone."
Although I would consider adding "the" before "air" in the first line.
I really enjoyed this poem, thanks for sharing.
My favorite lines in the poem are
"Weaving threads through air with erratic artistry
That cannot be followed by eyes alone."
Although I would consider adding "the" before "air" in the first line.
I really enjoyed this poem, thanks for sharing.