Who keeps the flies away.
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Thanks for the feedback guys.

To shed light on the questions re: broods and time-periods. The poem was inspired by watching swallows feeding in a field during the day, then being replaced by bats as the light faded. However, the language is partially influenced by the recent debates surrounding the European migrant crisis.
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Who keeps the flies away. - by Genuinebloke - 10-21-2015, 05:39 AM
RE: Who keeps the flies away. - by elviaje26 - 10-22-2015, 05:25 AM
RE: Who keeps the flies away. - by togaytofunction - 10-23-2015, 06:04 AM
RE: Who keeps the flies away. - by Clarko - 10-23-2015, 11:08 AM
RE: Who keeps the flies away. - by AshleighWood - 10-24-2015, 02:13 PM
RE: Who keeps the flies away. - by Genuinebloke - 10-25-2015, 02:12 AM
RE: Who keeps the flies away. - by AshleighWood - 10-25-2015, 05:38 AM
RE: Who keeps the flies away. - by Genuinebloke - 10-25-2015, 07:37 AM
RE: Who keeps the flies away. - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 07:48 AM
RE: Who keeps the flies away. - by rowens - 10-25-2015, 07:54 AM



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