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Dear Oscar
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10-25-2015, 07:36 AM
Oscar the Grouch. I think you reach heights between cheek of tyranny and asses. The poem up until asses and the semicolon shoots fire for me. Not that the rest of the poem is bad, it just slows down or drops off after that point. The blue tent of sky bit with the parts I mentioned, I think are very good. The rest works nicely, but is kind of an inflation. But lots of very good poems are like that. I just know I like the first half or so.
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Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-24-2015, 07:38 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Clarko - 10-24-2015, 10:10 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by billy - 10-25-2015, 09:21 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 06:39 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-25-2015, 07:36 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 07:48 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 08:06 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by just mercedes - 10-25-2015, 08:07 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:21 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 08:26 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:22 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-25-2015, 08:22 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:37 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 07:45 PM
RE: Dear Oscar - by billy - 10-25-2015, 09:38 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-31-2015, 05:15 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-31-2015, 12:03 PM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 06-20-2019, 11:01 AM
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