Dear Oscar

Dear Oscar

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10-25-2015, 08:22 AM

(10-25-2015, 08:07 AM)just mercedes Wrote: I held back because I was riffing off the combination of Oscar Pistorius and Oscar Wilde, so my eyes did strange things with 'picks' and 'cocks' and soon I was baffled altogether. The language felt self-mocking so I was looking for satire when I read 'Your palm / has cleared the path for asses'. Is there a third level there?

I'm not sure how many levels are there. I only wrote it Smile

I was just thinking of Palm Sunday with that bit, but I don't really remember everything I had in my head at the time...

It could be worse

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Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-24-2015, 07:38 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Clarko - 10-24-2015, 10:10 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by billy - 10-25-2015, 09:21 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 06:39 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-25-2015, 07:36 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 07:48 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 08:06 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by just mercedes - 10-25-2015, 08:07 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:21 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 08:26 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:22 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-25-2015, 08:22 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:37 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 07:45 PM

RE: Dear Oscar - by billy - 10-25-2015, 09:38 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-31-2015, 05:15 AM

RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-31-2015, 12:03 PM

RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 06-20-2019, 11:01 AM

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