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Dear Oscar
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10-25-2015, 08:37 AM
Any suggestions for the last lines? I'd quite like to keep the wing/spring thing because of the Happy Prince and of course, the giant, but I'm open to anything else (and even changing that if it needs to go). Would it work if I had:
Dear Oscar, all your words have taken wing ?
It could be worse
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Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-24-2015, 07:38 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Clarko - 10-24-2015, 10:10 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by billy - 10-25-2015, 09:21 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 06:39 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-25-2015, 07:36 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 07:48 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 08:06 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by just mercedes - 10-25-2015, 08:07 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:21 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 08:26 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:22 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-25-2015, 08:22 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:37 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 07:45 PM
RE: Dear Oscar - by billy - 10-25-2015, 09:38 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-31-2015, 05:15 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-31-2015, 12:03 PM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 06-20-2019, 11:01 AM
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