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Dear Oscar
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10-31-2015, 12:03 PM
The in your throat elegy bit always seems flat to me. Maybe it's some direct reference to lines I don't remember, and relies on strength from there. But if it's not that then it seems like a sort of shortcut to get to the next, better lines. I don't know much. It's your poem and so you're going to make it better than anyone else's ideas.
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Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-24-2015, 07:38 AM
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RE: Dear Oscar - by billy - 10-25-2015, 09:21 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 06:39 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-25-2015, 07:36 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 07:48 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 08:06 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by just mercedes - 10-25-2015, 08:07 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:21 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 08:26 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:22 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-25-2015, 08:22 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-25-2015, 08:37 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 10-25-2015, 07:45 PM
RE: Dear Oscar - by billy - 10-25-2015, 09:38 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Leanne - 10-31-2015, 05:15 AM
RE: Dear Oscar - by rowens - 10-31-2015, 12:03 PM
RE: Dear Oscar - by Achebe - 06-20-2019, 11:01 AM
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