Signs
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In her palm she held fire
so bright; searing light on display
so all could see,
but none could touch.

He, entranced by her energy,
tried to touch her incandescent flame.
In his hand he held water,
free-flowing and unconstrained.

Curiously, she gave her hand. Confused,
her brightness diminished.
She grew like a star, like a supernova
until finally, she exploded.

he without form
She without form

Edit 1

In her palm she held fire
so bright; searing light on display
so all could see,
but none could touch.

He, entranced by her energy,
tried to touch her incandescent flame.
In his hand he held water,
not contained and unconstrained.

Curiously, she gave him her hand.
Her brightness diminished(naturally).
She grew like a star to supernova
until finally, she exploded;

he, without form.
She, without form.



Original


In her palm she held Fire
in a form she controlled
so all could see, but none
could touch.

He, enamored by her energy
tried to touch but was burned.
In his hand held Water however,
so the burn was quick to cease.

Curiously, she gave him her hand.
He doused her brightness,
but she grew stronger in form.
Finally, she exploded;

He, without form.
She, without form.
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Messages In This Thread
Signs - by Weeded - 12-16-2015, 07:53 PM
RE: Signs - by ellajam - 12-16-2015, 11:00 PM
RE: Signs - by dukealien - 12-16-2015, 11:51 PM
RE: Signs - by shemthepenman - 12-17-2015, 01:29 AM
RE: Signs - by ellajam - 12-17-2015, 02:18 AM
RE: Signs - by porpoise - 12-17-2015, 01:36 PM
RE: Signs - by Weeded - 12-17-2015, 01:42 PM
RE: Signs - by Morze - 12-17-2015, 02:32 PM
RE: Signs - by Weeded - 12-17-2015, 06:30 PM
RE: Signs - by shemthepenman - 12-17-2015, 07:42 PM
RE: Signs - by Weeded - 12-17-2015, 10:52 PM
RE: Signs - by Rogo - 12-18-2015, 01:41 PM
RE: Signs - by billy - 12-18-2015, 04:13 PM
RE: Signs - by Weeded - 12-18-2015, 04:45 PM
RE: Signs - by shemthepenman - 12-18-2015, 06:59 PM
RE: Signs - by Weeded - 12-18-2015, 10:13 PM
RE: Signs - by Rogo - 12-19-2015, 12:22 AM
RE: Signs - by TSlate - 12-20-2015, 09:35 AM
RE: Signs - by shurgaree - 12-26-2015, 02:43 PM
RE: Signs - by Naima.m - 01-01-2016, 04:55 AM
RE: Signs - by QDeathstar - 01-01-2016, 11:19 PM
RE: Signs - by browtm7 - 01-02-2016, 04:24 AM
RE: Signs - by Weeded - 01-04-2016, 08:18 AM
RE: Signs - by REW - 01-04-2016, 10:33 AM
RE: Signs - by Weeded - 01-04-2016, 12:44 PM
RE: Signs - by PoetCraft - 01-05-2016, 01:27 PM
RE: Signs - by will - 01-06-2016, 05:09 AM
RE: Signs - by Weeded - 01-06-2016, 09:29 AM



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